This sketch of Shira and Ravak is very neat. Shira has very flowing lines, and the lines on Ravak's tail are also very nice. This is great for the 2013 year, because it symbolizes friendship and lightheartedness. There are only minor errors, like the shading (it could be a bit darker) and it is a little hard to tell the position that Ravak is in. But it's a great start for the new year! Let's all hope that this amazing artist has much more to come, because if they keep working at it, they will do a fine job I think!